A Night Time Confessional

By: Andrew Ramon

INT. CONFESSION BOOTH – NIGHT

A man wearing a baseball cap and jacket walks into a confession booth. He takes the cap off as he sits down. The priest walks in and sits down.

MAN

Bless me father for I have sinned. It has been six years since my last confession.

PRIEST

That’s quite a long time.

MAN

Yeah well, that’s how long I’ve been in the Marines.

PRIEST

I see, thank you for your service.

MAN

I’m not sure if I would call it a service.

PRIEST

Why is that? You risked your life for our country.

MAN

That’s what I wanted forgiveness for, but I don’t know if it can be forgiven.

PRIEST

The Lord welcomes all of his children that ask for forgiveness.

MAN

Are you allowed to tell anyone what I say in here?

PRIEST

No. What you tell me in here stays between the two of us, and God.

 

The man pauses.

 

MAN

I’ve killed people. So many people. I estimate it’s something around twenty, but I’ve honestly lost count. I’ve done so many horrible things that I’m not sure if there’s any hope for me. 

 

PRIEST

I see, but war is a different circumstance. The Lord understands when you’re fighting for your country. He knows that you didn’t want to kill.

 

Pause.

 

MAN

My entire life has felt like a bottomless void, but there, there was different. The feeling that I get from watching the light go out in their eyes was something I haven’t been able to recreate with any drug I can find here, and That’s the thing, I did want to kill. I loved it. I was fantastic at it. I killed people I didn’t need to. I killed people for fun.

 

The priest freezes.

 

PRIEST

This is a terrible thing to admit my son, but war can change people. The important thing is that you’re trying to change. That’s all you can do.

MAN

That’s the hardest part.

 

He takes a deep breath. 

 

MAN

Last week my wife was murdered. The police don’t have any idea who did it.

 

They both pause.

 

PRIEST

I’m so sorry for your loss.

MAN

They don’t have any leads. They’re about to close the case.

PRIEST

And are you asking for forgiveness because you want to kill this person?

MAN

No, I don’t.

 

The priest sighs in relief.

 

PRIEST

That’s good, the first step to accepting this is forgiving whoever did this to your wife.

The man pauses.

MAN

I killed my wife.

The priest sits there silently.

MAN

She said that I was going crazy, that she wanted out of our marriage. Couldn’t have that now could I?

The priest remains silent.

MAN

And you can’t tell a single person in the world, can you?

The priest’s voice quivers.

PRIEST

…No.

The man puts his hat back on and stands up.

MAN

That’s what I thought. Have a nice day father.

He exits. The priest sits there in silence.